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It was fun. 

A character disguised themself as a cult's cat god, the ranger pinned a guy, and the dwarf monk threw a bruiser at the high priest, killing him.
For the past half a year I've been working on a secret project, my biggest fanfiction yet. And now its done. 

Almost 40 chapters long. 

It'll be up on and Archive of our own soon, so keep your eyes peeled for it. 


me: you do remember shes a robot right? They can repair her, rebuild her, and her head is intact so they can probably salvage her memories too.


So i found the first two episodes of Tokyo esp dubbed so i thought why not and checked them out. 

Let me just say this show starts off great. 

Theres a huge city-wide conflict going on, psycics are wrecking shit, and theres this booming orchesra music playing in the background and its like a Dark knight movie and just as our heroine is about to drop kick this psycic plant lady it cuts to her dropping into an old man's house naked. 

Ep 2 drops us into a flashback right as things get interesting. 

Let me clarify, it stared out awesome, theres a big city wide conflict going on and big heroic music is playing. But theres no heroes. The protagonits don't show up until the last 4th of ep 1 and everything else consists of just the bad guys going around terrorizing the city with their genuinely cool powers. With the music and everything I half expected optimus prime to airdrop in but this entire sequence (which takes up all of ep 1 and the start of ep2) doesn't really feel like a two sided conflict until the last five minutes when the main character FINALLY shows up, and as I excitedly asked for more the show spit in my face with ep2.

They suddenly flash back to the main charcter discovering her powers and takes us out of the intense psycic warzone into a calmer and less urgent situation that honestly should have come before the big climactic city fight. Then the rest of ep2 is world building and character development when I'm just sitting here thinking "WHAT ABOUT THE HUGE CONFLICT THAT WAS GOING ON IN EP1!?" Normally sudden flashbacks don't bother me BUT THE SHIFT WAS SO SUDDEN AND UNEXPECTED IN A WAY THAT RUINS THE PACING. Its like i was watching the death star raid from star wars and it suddenly changes to forest gump right as they unter the trench. 

Animationwise this show had some pretty bad cgi, sometimes they tried to hide it and other times the cgi was just right there. I usually hate cgi but at the same time it did a good enough job with the action to make me forget the fact that the giant ball of cars is computer generated. 

Another thing this show is good at is playing with the mood in scenes. The first episode really juggled between the despair of the villains slowly messing up the city and the hopeful scenes of the protagonists taking a stand against the enemy espers.

soundtrack is also very good and overpowering in the right ways. This one track; World on fire sounds like it belongs in a movie.

Characterwise I barely got to know them. We don't get much screentime with the protagonist until ep2 and the other protagonists in ep1 don't really shine very much. 

Tokyo Esp has alot of great ideas and potential but it squanders said potential with its poor storytelling. 

I'll watch the rest when I find it but i'm honestly dissapointed.
I decided to check this out for lulz.

and it surprisingly was pretty good. It was funny, animated well, and visually unique. Only complaint is the eyes. Everyone looks like they're either tired, confused, or plotting murder. Its like the situation I have with the lips in my love story. And that fanservice bit towards the end. That was kinda lame.

I recomend checking it out, just for the writing. 


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It was fun. 

A character disguised themself as a cult's cat god, the ranger pinned a guy, and the dwarf monk threw a bruiser at the high priest, killing him.


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Margolias-Lulamoon Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2015
So, Nick deleted his account.
You know what's up with that?
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No idea. Not the first time hes done this.
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Is he okay?
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I haven't heard him say anything. 

If its anything like before he'll be back in a few days.
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